When you slam down the Hammer ~ Daniel J. DeMarco

 

February 1, 2010

  • Haiku’s from my 1st and 4th period senior English classes.

    These 5 students’ poems were the best:

    ****Alex:

    A storm is brewing / night bestows itself upon / the glorious earth

    The truth is out there / swimming in a sea of lies / waiting to be found

    ****Ben:

    Fragrant red blossoms / swirls of different colors / like a galaxy

    Piercing through the clouds / like the prince of light striving / to match the heavens

    Leagues under the sea / fluorescent fish swimming in / vibrant toned coral

    Below shallow sod / beneath the solid bedrock / mighty caverns lie

    ****Stuart:

    I see the chaos / who are we? what can we do? / Just open your heart

    A fire that cleans / all the sin from the forest / to start a new day

    Different faces / walk along worn out places / going nowhere fast

    ****Lauren:

    Feline creatures roam / they move in a stealth like mode / they pounce on the bug

    The different mood / the nervously awkward face / today’s the first day

    ****Jon:

    In the field of fun / people run around loudly / others are blooming

    ****The following poems (by various students) made me smile:

    People say haiku’s / are easy, but they are not / they are very hard

    I went to Nordstrom’s / and bought a pair of black shoes / I really like shoes

    I just got a car / he looks purple at nighttime / I have named him Steve

    It’s the last poem / just in time for the lunch bell / I’m not proud of this

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